Palatine's Primal Review

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Deis Jun 15, 07
You've included some good information, but, again, you seem to make the assumption that readers are already familiar with the game.

Your writing is good, and you haven't made any basic grammar or spelling mistakes; at least, none that are immediatly obivious.

Again, as someone who knows nothing about the game, I'd like to see more information, and maybe some screenshots, just to illustrate your points furthur.

Finally, why is it red?
Last edited by Deis :: Jun 23, 07



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